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Chapter 1: Victoria Sponge


Eden sighed as she put the phone down. Another minor case, seriously? She twirled her hair in her fingers as she thought long and hard.
Who would steal a birthday cake and why?
It wasn't her idea of a crime but matters had to be resolved. Ever since her dad retired from Chief of Police at Woodbury, he was the one giving her hints and ideas as to what was happening and where.
She slipped her shoes back on and put on a long jacket, to keep her warm in this September evening.
It was the 7th. Pecan's birthday was in three days, so she needed to act quickly. Or, as quickly as someone investigating bakery theft could act.
She went to the scene of the crime first.
"Come in, come in. You must be ze one everybody talks about." The human replied.
"That's correct, I'm the detective here." Eden replied.
"My name is Romano. I come from far away town to create a super big bakery here. But the cake, she is gone!" he threw his hands in the air in shock.
"Yeah, that's what I've heard. Do you have any security here? Or any ideas of who would do this??" she took out a notepad and pen and sat down with the patisseur.
"Well, ze first person I think of is this one guy from my village. His name is Curly. Being the swine he is he would always eat my masterpieces."
"Ok, but this Curly, do you think he would follow you here of all places?" she asked inquisitively.
"Hmm... I... I think not. My creations go for an absurd number of bells. The one that was taken was worth a king's ransom."
"Ransom... Now there's a motive. Would you ever pay to get your cake back?"
"If I could afford to, I would. Who can put a price on pride? Somebody could discover my secret in crafting these delicacies!" Romano was visibly shaking, angry that this happened.
"Well, I can't say for certain but that's another motive. Thank you for your time, Romano. I'll be in touch." Eden smiled and left. She then took her phone out.
"Hello, J? I think I may have some leads..."
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Chapter 2: Lemon Drizzle

"It's J here, what have you got for me, E?" the boomy voice replied.
"Well, I have two potential leads. One is sabotage, the other is cakenapping." she answered back softly, milling round a backstreet in the city.
"Cakenapping? That's the stupidest thing I've ever heard, but I'll believe it."
"Well, what other reason would a cake go missing other than wanting money for its return, or someone eating it?"
"You've got a point there. You'd want something out of a felony, right? I'll keep you posted on what comes my way. Over and out!" J then hung up on Eden.
Eden put her phone away and returned to the bustle of the crowded Friday street. Anyone could be a suspect. She couldn't go around accusing everybody though. She figured it'd be good to ask at the source, again.

She took the bus back to town and dropped by Pecan's house. She knocked on the door twice. Luckily her friend was still home.
"Yes? Eden, how may I help you?" the squirrel politely asked.
"Well Pecan, I don't know how to drop this on you but... I have some bad news. Your cake has gone missing."
"Oh my... I paid top bell for that! You'd like me to assist you in recovering it, correct?"
"That's right, mind if I come in?"

The human and squirrel took their time discussing potential reasons as to how and why the confectionary treat went missing. Eden thought long and hard once again over the mysterious circumstances. Surely there was some way to find it... Then inspiration struck her! She could check the CCTV outside the front and back of the shop. If this Curly fellow did come to the city to cause havoc, she would identify him easily. With the approval of J and the local police force, of course.

"Thank you again for your time, Pecan." Eden paused as she finished the last of her latté.
"Anytime dear friend, it's the least I can do to aid you in solving this mystery. Take care now."
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Due to my absence from ACC starting at the end of the 2nd, here's a nice cliffhanger for today. Featuring what I've got for the majority of the story.

Chapter 3: Carrot
Eden went back to her home and contemplated the mystery. Why would anyone even think of doing this? That was the first thing to come to mind, but she casually dismissed that manner of thinking the same way one would dismiss ones clothing at a day at the beach.
"Cake... Curly... Pecan's birthday... Something just isn't right..." she muttered under her breath as she paced round her living room. No ideas sprung to mind. She decided to get a clear start on things tomorrow.
The 8th of September. 2 days till Pecan's birthday.
Eden bumped into Pecan again outside the bank, next to a shady little shop allegedly ran by a notorious con artist. However today was a day where the shop was closed.
"Oh heya Pecan, how are things?" Eden smiled and bowed politely.
"Not much, just considering window shopping at GracieGrace. How I wish I could afford such luxuries!" she beamed in return.
"Wouldn't we all. Anyways, I gotta dash. Catch you later!"
"Ok, take care!" was all Pecan could muster before they parted ways.
Eden took a look round the back of Redd's place. All the doors and windows were tightly locked. It seemed harmless enough, given other shops shut up securely at the end of the day. Eden wasn't convinced however. But there was nothing she could do with no warrant, and getting one approved would take around 2 weeks. She scavenged through Redd's bins and found nothing. Downtrodden, she return back to the village.

Chapter 4: Tiramisu
Eden phoned J as soon as she woke up.
"J, got any info on Curly?" she enquired.
"I checked him out yesterday, he's as clean as a whistle. He hasn't been within 50 miles of that baker who accused him of stalking, in the past 5 years!"
"Wh-what? Then what do we do? We have no leads, no perp, nothing."
"CCTV? Go check that out, in case you got sidetracked. We'll speak later, E." The chief put the phone down.
"Shucks, another day in the city. Its her birthday tomorrow, what do I do?!" Eden grew more and more anxious by the second.
Eden's anxieties didn't resolve, not even on the beautiful bus journey through forest canopies and the eventual urbanisation of the city's scape. She took her belongings and headed to the police station.
"Officer Booker, I'd like to see the CCTV for the 7th of September, please." she saluted out of habit. It was a thing her father would do out of respect whilst he was on duty. Though the salute would typically be directed as civilians, not officers.
"Oh, um... Right... The tapes. Right this way... Please..." the pug muttered and coughed as he strode to the storage room.
Eden scoured the footage for even the slightest suspicious thing. At the end of the day, before she gave up, she saw one brief thing.
An animal wearing a face mask and black trenchcoat. There was no doubt. It was Pecan.
"Pecan, why would you frame people and cause all this?! I need to know!" she stuttered.
Eden retired for the day. She headed out of the station and wanted to check out Redd's place again. She went round the back of the store. She scoured for a way in. She was so entranced in her activities it was too late to notice the animal behind her, soaked rag in hand.
The hand clamped tight over Eden's nose and mouth. She let out a whimper. All went dark.

Chapter 5: Birthday Pt 1.
When Eden awoke, it was the 10th of September. Not that she knew this. She awoke to find herself in darkness. She tried to get up off the floor, but she was unable. Zipties secured her wrists and ankles and her blindfold was secure. Black cloth was clenched between her teeth and tightly knotted, silencing her.
"So, you've finally come round, huh?" Pecan snickered.
"Hmm... Mnnfgfhh!" was all Eden could muster.
"Sshhh... I need to dispose of you so Redd and I can muscle in on this city. This bakery theft was a big ruse by us all to dispose of meddling snoops such as yourself. Be a good girl and tell us how to put your Daddy out of business? Pretty please? It is my birthday after all..."
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Title update :3
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Thank you It'll be worth the wait. Will Eden be rescued? What of Redd? Find out next time
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I love it! It's definitely my kind of story haha! I'm excited to know the rest don't leave.
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I hope you liked the twist and sorry you got a sorta rough treatment from Pecan xD
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The finale will be up as soon as I can think of a satisfying conclusion.
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The finale will be up by the end of the week, then begins (unfortunately) a long hiatus from ACC and other contact with people :/
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