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Hadger
 
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PROLOGE

tormiter walked onto the bus. the bus was big and yellow. (just 2 b clear, it was not yellow on the inside bcuz yellow walls r ugly)

there was a cat on the bus named rover

rover: hi im rover

tormiter sed, wow u r creepy y r u talking 2 me XD

rover sez, wats ur name

tormiter: tormiter

rover says, lol thats funny

tormiter's like, why

rover: bcuz we r going to tormiterville

tormiter: lol wut a kowinsidens

rover: ikr

tormiter: XD

rover: so r u a boy or a girl

tormiter:

rover: wut time is it

tormiter: time 4 u 2 get a woch

rover: wats a woch

tormiter: ur stupid

rover:

tormiter sorry i didnt mean it

tormiter huged rover

rover: its ok

tormiter and rover r now frends

tormiter walked of the bus (rover didnt go with him bcuz hes a bad frend). he was in tormiterville!!!!!!!!

many misterees awaited him. what will those misterees be? (that was a retoricle question btw, plz dont answer it bcuz then u will spoyul the plot)

btw if u critisize me ill tell jader 2 ban u so no critisizum thx
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OH EM GEEEEEE THIS IS THE BEST PLOT EVAH! I CANT WAIT TO SEE THE MISTRESSES AND I NEARLY CRIED WHEN TORTY HURT POOR ROVERS FEELINGS!
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Hadger
 
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thx! btw, do u want 2 b in the story? I need charectors, and ur personallitty woud b prfect 4 the story.

but srsly thx 4 the post dude. i apreshiate it.
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O no problem. I wud luv to b in tis story!
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Cariicarky
 
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tortimr is so mean he shoulndt b meyer!
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Hadger
 
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caricorky, do u want 2 b in the story?

realy apreshiate the posts gies. thak u
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Cariicarky
 
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suer ill b in the story.
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No problem but thx to u for makin this story!
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Hadger
 
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i was so inspierd by all ur nise posts that I desidid 2 rite an other chapter!

CHAPTER 1: THE FIRST DAY IN TORMITERVILLE

wen tormiter arived @ tormiterville, theyre wer alot of ppl

they all introducked themselves

caricork: hi im caricork

bulbasorisgold: hi im bulbasorisgold

coper: hi im coper

boker: hi im boker

coper and boker: we r cops

fang: hi im fang

biskut: hi im biskut (biskut is super awesome btw)

frita: hi im frita

fang: lol u look like a cheezberger (fang is vary mean sumtimes)

frita:

fang: sry

frita its ok

blubear: hi im blubear

bill: hi im bill

margie: hi im margie

nook: hi im nook. im mayor.

caricork, bulbasorisgold, coper, boker, fang, frita, blubear, bill, margie, and nook: WELCOME 2 TORMITERVILLE!!!!!

(dont worry their r other charectors, u will meet them l8r)

suddenly it got all dark outside

it became lite again. caricork was ded.

evry1 gaspd.

who kild caricork? find out in nekst chapter!

(btw sry for kiling ur charector so erly caricork, i liked all my other charectors so mutch that i cant kil them sry)
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Cariicarky
 
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y did u hav 2 kill my charector????
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Hadger
 
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im haveng alot of fun riteng this so im gunna rite chapter 2 now

CHAPTER 2:

everyone: omg who did that

frita: i bet it was fang hes a wolf

fang: not all wolfs r bad (even mean ppl hav a hart )

frita: im srry it wasnt fang

fang:

frita: it wasnt me

fang: it wasnt me me

blubear: it wasnt me

biskut: it wasnt me

bill: it wasnt me

margie: it wasnt me

nook: it wasnt me

boker: it wasnt me

bulbasorisgold: it wasnt me

tormiter: it wasnt me

rover: it wasnt me

boker: who was it

coper: ill find out!

tormiter: no i got this coper

tormiter walked up to caricork and grabbed the dna

tormiter looked at the dna

tormiter: it was coper!

coper: no it wasnt

tormiter: the dna says it was u also ur the only one who didnt say it wasnt me so it has 2 b u

coper: fine it was me

nook: ur fired coper

coper: no!!!!!!!!!

nook put coper in jail

coper

nook: wow tormiter ur good at this

everyone: yeah hes a gr8 dective

nook: want 2 b a cop?

tormiter: sure

nook: ok, now u r mister tormiter

mister tormiter:

mister tormiter was vary happy that day. his first day in mister tormiterville and hes alredy a cop!!!!!!! amazing! he was defiantly going to solv evry misteree.

ill post the next chapter if 100 ppl flag this thred
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You're a very talented writer!  You should think about getting that published.
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Cariicarky
 
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come on gies every1 flag the thred i wanna c chapter 3!!!!!!
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Hadger
 
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thak u vary mutch!

and ya every1 flag this thred or no chapter 3

arura do u want a charector in the story?
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can i be in the story 2
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Aurora6
 
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Ok, you can make Aurora one of the villagers.
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Hadger
 
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yes u can briel02. thx for flaging

ok arura

remember 2 flag this thred guys
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This is an inspiring piece of literature! The amount of work and dedication you have put into this beautiful piece of work is certainly worth recognition. The character development, plot, and attention to detail are all top notch and writers should strive to be as successful as you. I'd give the current story a 10/10!

You have earned a flag my friend, I look forward to future chapters. Great work, I expect a lot of you!

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can i hav a new charector sence mine ded?
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thak u so mutch espio for flagging do u want a charector?

and yes caricork, u can hav a new charector
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I'd be honored to be including in a story such as this.

(yes pls id luv a charector )
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Oh em gee, tis is a wunderful story..pls continue!
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beautiful story, brought me 2 tears... so touching
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Hadger
 
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im glad u gies r enjoyeng the story. i realy apreshiate it gies.

misamzing82, do u want a charector?
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ya that sounds fun
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