This is an inspiring piece of literature! The amount of work and dedication you have put into this beautiful piece of work is certainly worth recognition. The character development, plot, and attention to detail are all top notch and writers should strive to be as successful as you. I'd give the current story a 10/10!
You have earned a flag my friend, I look forward to future chapters. Great work, I expect a lot of you!
"I hate to see you walk through the final door at the edge of existence...
But I love to watch you leave." ~Janet