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wheatly4ever
 
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10/22/2017 7:25am
Chapter 1 the mayor
I looked out the flap of the tent the sun was shinning and the villagers started approaching my tent "it can't be HER can it?" A voice said."it can't be" said another " no Allie don't go in she's evil". At that moment a person came into my tent she had a four leaf clover in her hair. "H-h-hi my names allie "she let out a shivering hand " hi I'm coco" I said people didn't like me very much people wrote stories and told lies about me murdering people and turning them into gyroids that was not true."i-i-i was thinking you could maybe well" she was sputtering never a good sign. "Well yo-you are pretty umm" she started  "uniqe". " ya I know I said shifting my gaze to the whole that used to be my mouth."well ... I want you to move here" that was the most wonderful sentence I had ever heard."REALLY" I said,she nodded I heard gasps outside the tent no dought they heard it two ."well I have to go" she said " see you soon I guess". When she left the tent I heard some words I will not repeat . that night I watched the stars my names coco and tommorow I'm moving to pokevill.

What did you guys think of chapter 1 I thought I would give coco a chance rather than make a horror story about her up next
chapter 2 the move.
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wheatly4ever
 
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Chapter 2 the move
I was back at my house I was packing. "And sally you go next to river" ya I name my gyroids but they seem like my only friends sometimes. I had everything packed I was ready I headed out the door. As I left the train station I heard yells of joy "I don't live there I don't live there " I repeated in my head I heard a rumble the train had started moving soon I fell asleep."pokevill station eek eek" I had arrived as I walked past the seats people gasped mothers covers there children's eyes as I walked past I finally was out of there but the mothers were talking about not letting monsters on the train. When I got out the sun was shinning I was greeted by a wolf with a black  white checkers shirt a cat with 6s for eyes cat with yellow eyes a cheese mouse and the mayor the other residents were in there house with the blinds down peeking out to see me. Hi my names lolly said the 6 eye cat I'm chadder said the mouse I'm katt said the other cat  and I'm lobo said the wolf. My new house was in the distance I introduced myself and went to my new home I unpacked sally river forest and dawn spread out my carpet and placed my furniture I was unpacked as I headed to main street the sun was going down I was alone but I had a feeling,a feeling that someone was watching me.

DUNDUNDUN cliff hanger who or what is watching her only the next chapter will know stay tuned for chapter 2 the missing.
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wheatly4ever
 
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I meant chapter 3 the missing as a apolagy a sneak peak
It was chasing me I ran and ran it was awful heard a scream behind me I looked and the thing was gone in its place was a gyroid a lone gyroid I went over it looked like lliod my blue fur was swept to the side as the wind blew I went to touch it and that's when I felt it... The change.
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wheatly4ever
 
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Chapter 3 the missing
I went to bed restless was there anything there anything at all why did I feel "it". The only time I felt that was.. Was .was when I became what I am . it was a cold night and I was lost I had left the ophange again but I don't know why I went into the woods. I was scared suddenly I saw a thing black and ugly I ran but it was chasing me I ran and ran it was awful I heard a scream behind me I looked the thing was gone in its place was a gyroid a lone gyroid I went over to it it looked like lloid my blue fur was sweapt to the side as the wind blew I went to touch him and that's when I felt " it" first my eyes I my gaze was changed instead of seeing Normal i saw out of two small holes and one small one the small one at the bottom the two big ones where my eyes should have been my mouth was gone and so were my eyes but I could still talk and scream it was incredibly painful . I felt stiff like a toy with hinges so I can move my arms and legs I saw the ground covers in blue fur my fur I fell to the ground with a thud (the sound of wood hitting the floor) I looked at my reflection in the water what had I become?. But it couldn't it just couldn'ti hardly slept that night if it was what I thou it was pokevill was in trouble. I woke up to screams I went outside a gyroid lay in the grass a gyroid that looked like... LOLLY the mayor came running she wrote   something down that's 3 gone everyone looked at me I was in trouble.

I know no one is reading this but I'm having lots of fun writing
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DaBraxMan
 
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Ethan
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5/26 4:54pm
An interesting concept! Keep writing!
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wheatly4ever
 
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Chapter 4  the dark
We stared at the gyroid it pinged in a alarmed tone and the mayor picked it up I'm so sorry Polly she brought it to a vacant house inside was ten beds ,ten TVs and a fridge she put the gyroid on one of the beds pulled up the covers. The TV was on a cooking show. The other gyroids there looked like drift and Francine . in the room it was cold on all the gyroid there were stains by the eyes stains of tears the lolly gyroid was crying fresh tears. The mayor pocked food in the mouth holes I stepped out. The other villagers were not impressed " I knew you were trouble:" said drake " I didn't do it " I said  it was - was" I was scared to say it  " was who?" He asked . I couldn't take it I ran to my house and locked to door. That night when I looked out my window I saw something something black and ugly" the dark" as the thing slinked towards my house I was frozen it looked up at me for a few seconds and turned around it was going toward bobs house I couldn't watch I ran out the door to stop it I couldn't let it happen again.

I'm so glad to be back I will right the next chapter very soon
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KorruptedFiles
 
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Matt
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*scratches chin*

Interesting.

*goes back to scratching chin*
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wheatly4ever
 
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10/22/2017 7:25am
Next chapter is coming eoon
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danielchavarria
 
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Pupil
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Wow! That was an interesting chapter
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MiriamSalpeter
 
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