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Wow! This seems really interesting! Can't wait till chapter 5!
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Chapter 5

AUTHORS NOTES:

I apologize for not getting this up yesterday, my laptop decided to cut out whilst writing this chapter, so it wouldn't save. This was at Midnight, so it was rewrite at midnight or save it until tomorrow. I'll have a second one up ASAP!

I also apologize for not going into Steven's perspective, by pure chance, Steven is the name of this bully I know, so I have things against the name. I will try to write in his perspective more though!


END OF AUTHORS NOTES





Walt's POV

Dear diary...
I don't regret leaving the agency to do this. I set up a whole clan called S.E.E.D. Because of all the seeding in wild world country, we named our clan this. We saw Rebecca and Steven move into the agency house, and we decided to seed them.

Steven's POV

Rebecca and I managed to convince Mum and dad that we were off on a residential trip with school. We were actually moving into the S.A.V. Agency house.  SAV is the company who need our help. It stands for Save Animal Valley, and apparently we are needed to help them build peace with City Folk Country.

We moved in, and we were told by Astrid, tears trickling down her face that Walt had left the agency, and wanted to kill them. I cried. I was only 12. I didn't need the prospect of someone out to kill me haunting me every night.

Astrid's POV
Dear diary...
After telling them about Walt, I rushed over to the office, still crying. I knew that what Walt wanted, he got. The peace will never come without these kids. I knew we needed to build up our defences too. We had an applicant, but I doubt he would come through...

Moe's POV

I flattened my Fish-bone shirt. I was ready. The interview I hope would go well. My mind drifted to tom. I wonder how his interview was coming...

I walked into the SAV base, I knew that I did all I could and that if I wasn't good enough, I had blown my chance.

I met a young kangaroo named Astrid, she told me that the interview looked good, and I was hired!

Tom's POV

I flattened my BB shirt. I was ready. I hoped the interview went well. Moe would do well. I could feel it.
I walked into SEED's base, ready for my interview. Walt immediately accepted me, and told me I had a field job already! I was told to seed the house with a replica of tom nook's shop.

I walked out of the base, and onto the streets of New Animal Valley.




END OF CHAPTER 5
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great job spyro and dont worry i know how computer issues can delay your writing. right now i dont have a word possessor so i cant type my chapters and its going to farther delay my already late chapter
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Thanks yugioh! I know, they can be so annoying. When typing out my chapters, I sometimes have to use write or die, otherwise I will take a break and 2 hours later it's still not done...

If you need a word processor, if using windows, get Libreoffice. I recommend it and use it personally. I can't help with mac, sorry!
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Chapter 6

AUTHOR'S NOTES

Sorry about this! I will have two chapters up today, I promise.

This chapter is quite long, so enjoy

PS. N.A.V. is New Animal Valley.

END OF AUTHOR'S NOTES




Tom's POV

Walking along the streets of New Animal Valley, I often got lost. Not today. Walt decided to give me a complete map of N.A.V. I felt the soft snow beneath my feet, with the cold snowflakes tingling the tip of my nose.

I arrived at the house, and I heard Cyrus' new song Crane. He went from working in re-tail to being an awful singer. I planted the seed, and I crept away silently

Moe's POV

Astrid told me to guard the kids house from a SEED agent. I sneaked out onto the N.A.V. streets. I crept along the street towards the house.

I saw a set of yellow eyes aim at me, then scurry off. I went looking for the seed, I knew that the seed was already planted. I shouted to Rebecca and Steven to stay awake and climb out the window. They obeyed, and as soon as they climbed out, the whole house was seeded. I could relax. The kids were safe.

Rebecca's POV

I was sitting there, listening to Cyrus' new song crane when I heard a blue cat knock on the door, and he shouted “Climb out the window. NOW!” Steven and I obeyed, we scurried out the window. We had no home, what could we do now?

The locker was blocked off.

The blue cat (Who was named Moe) told us, we could live with him in his flat in N.A.V.

We had a home, and a friend. But we would have more enemies...

[end of chapter 6]
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I wasn't sure why I felt a need to post that at 7:16 am.

Working on chapter 7 now
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"I heard Cyrus' new song Crane. He went from working in re-tail to being an awful singer."
I had to laugh at that
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Who couldn't?
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as a joke, I wrote the lyrics to Cyrus's new song:

Enjoy! although it is short...

I worked in a construction site,
with a beautiful crane coming at you...

It broke through your wall and heart killing you and your family.

*singing to the tune of the chorus of Wrecking ball*

I killed all of your family!

and I broke all the house down!

all I wanted was to kill your dog

because he bi-it-it me!

He bi-it-it me!
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"I worked in a construction site,
with a beautiful crane coming at you...

It broke through your wall and heart killing you and your family.

*singing to the tune of the chorus of Wrecking ball*

I killed all of your family!

and I broke all the house down!

all I wanted was to kill your dog

because he bi-it-it me!

He bi-it-it me!"


LOL!!!!!
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on chapter 7 now!

Thanks
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Cyrus's bit
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that was a great chapter spyro. as for the word prossessor, i already have 23 chapters saved in a microsoft word document so i need micosoft word to continue but thanks for the suggestion. im working on getting it and since im not done writing the chapter i dont need it that desperately yet
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Libreoffice can read word files too =)

Here's Chapter 7!




AUTHOR'S NOTES

This chapter includes some violence, so if you are easily grossed out, do not read the spoilers

END OF AUTHOR'S NOTES

Steven's POV

We arrived at Moe's flat, and I was pleasantly surprised at the fanciness of it. It was in the expensive part or N.A.V with double glazed windows. It was beautifully decorated with the sleek set, with a bedroom filled with minimalist series. He liked the trendy themes.

We were told that we weren't able to live with Moe for very long, only until we can put a down-payment on our own flat. We explained that we had no money, and he said we will need to work then. The cheek! I'm 12 years old, I do not need to be getting a job yet.

later...

Well, I was wrong about not needing a job! Rebecca and I were hired to work in a shop, owned by a tanuki named tom nook...

Nook's POV

Well, I hired 2 brand new employees today their names were Rebecca na d Steven. They were diligent workers, with a passion for working the tills. Nookingtons looked good to last at this rate and at 5,000 bells an hour, it's a steal!

Astrid's POV
Dear diary...

I sobbed quietly in my Astro bedroom. I had lost my brother. He was mad. I was mad.

I heard some raindrops pattering on the window-ledge. I heard nothing. Silence.

Moe's POV

I walked into the S.A.V. base, and I saw or heard nothing. Not even the rain. I called out "Astrid?" There was no reply...

I saw a shadow on the floor creep behind me. It had very pointy ears.

I saw the opening to where Astrid slept.

>>> Slight Violence startsI saw the knife

I saw the blood

I saw the limp body.
<<< Slight violence ends

Astrid was losing blood, fast.

Using my aniphone, I dialed for an ambulance. I knew astrid wouldn't survive without being stitched up. She was rushed up to N.A.V. hostpital as soon as possible.

[end of chapter 7]
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good chapter spyro, cant wait for more. can i still save my work as a word document?
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Yes you can!You simply click on the menu on microsoft word (.doc) :3
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and does it cost anything to get
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WOW!!!! Cryus' song! I just love this fic! It keeps on getting better and better! Can't wait till next chapter! (I also love how you did the P.O.V.'s! Very creative!)
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Thanks! I actually got the idea from Liv's PATH =)
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