Animal Crossing Community: FiNaLeuS-----Part One!

This is my first attempt at a fan fic, so I am unsure of what to do

feel free to give feedback (no matter how harsh), suggestions, and talk

Part One: Who am I?

People have always seen me as a traveler, they could just tell. Immortal, unable to have a life unless I was willing to watch my loved ones grow old and die (and of course they have), I roamed endlessly from town to town. I had few friends.... My life was a lonely one. I've had so much to cry over, and very little to enjoy.

I remember a day long ago where I had encountered a young girl in the town of Finaleus. She seemed sickly, and could not go out and play with the other children. I also noticed she had a dazed look, and later realized she was blind. She was mostly in bed, so I made trips often to that town to visit her. I told her stories, about my trip across the sea, about the UFO i shot from the sky, and about the way the moonflowers glistened blue underneath the Full Moon. I don't think she was able to understand that much, because the descriptions were of no meaning to her, but she full-heartedly listened and always smiled. She brought me a sense of joy, one who was so young and had nothing, yet always grateful for what she had. This was one of the first times I grew attached to something. I continued to stop by for the next few years, until one of my visits. I arrived. I knocked on the door, and her mother answered. She was crying, saying how it was such a blessing that I came, at the perfect time. Cassie was dying. I entered the room that I have spent so much time in, and realized she had spent her whole life in there. I sat on the chair on her bedside, and took her hand. It was sickly pale. She smiled, knowing I had come. I told her another story. It was about heaven. I told her that it would be a much better place, where we would be able to play in the fields of moonflowers and go on adventures across the seas. I started weeping, telling her that everything was gonna be okay, and I would be waiting for her on the other side. She whispered, "I know you will be. See you soon" and she drifted off into sleep, smiling, though with a pained expression as her terminal illness was in its final phases. I left the city, and when I came back she was long gone. Little did she know that I would not be waiting for her on the other side... i would be eternally left alone in this world, alone. And I would never see her again.

My name is Rover, you may have met me somewhere and sometime. It doesn't really matter. So many faces have passed me, so many years have gone by, and my life has been overlived for too long. I am hoping that you would be able to find Cassie in the next place for me, she will probably be wondering where I am...

So... what do you think?