Prolouge Charlotte was a happy 10 year old girl with a twin brother,Ace. She had everything she ever wanted in Life but when her Life takes a turn for the the worst, she will understand the hardships of Love, Friendship,And Sorrow.
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"Ace, come on lets go look for some bugs for school!" Charlotte yelled. "Already ahead of you."Ace said. Charlotte grabbed her shovel, gloves, and bucket. "At this rate we will never get to the garden." Ace said impatiently. "I'm coming, I 'm coming" Charlotte said. "Kids is that you?" their mother said. "Noooo, if mom sees us she'll know we are going into the garden, and you know that mom doesn't like us back there!!!" Ace said in a harsh whisper. "Just go, hurry she's coming!!" Charlotte said slipping out the door.
"Ooooo, look at this one!!" Charlotte said "Oh, I know that one it is uh uh uh-" Ace was cut off by Charlotte's shriek "EEEEEEEKKKKK!!!" Charlotte screeched "What?!? What is it?"Ace asked "iT'S A SNAKE!!!!!" Charlotte said running in fear Then right when Ace turned around, the snake jumped up and bit his hand.
"Ac-? Ac- c- yo- hea- m-" Charlotte said but Ace couldn't hear her.
Charlotte pulled out her cellphone and pocket knife. What do I do first? Kill the snake or call 911? Charlotte thought to herself She decide to kill the snake first. She aimed for the snake's head and hit head on. Now...To save Ace She thought She dialed 911. "Hello this is 911. What's your emergency?" The operator asked "Yes hello. My twin brother, Ace, was bit by a snake and is now unconcouis." "Ok. Where do you live?" "432 Orchard Way." "Ok. I'm sending help." "Thank you."
10 Minutes Later Charlotte started to hear sirens and the saw an ambulance. She jumped up and started to wave her hands so they could see her. The ambulance stopped as Charlotte's parents ran out. Charlotte stopped them so she could tell them what happened. Then a doctor came over and said..."Are you the parents of this boy?" "Yes." Charlotte's parents said. "I hate to tell you this but....Your son Ace will never be able to walk again."
Signature-------------- "Like a boat out to sea the silence was too defining" "Hate can not drive out hate, only love can do that"- Martin Luther King Jr
Thanks!!! Well...Ace....is going to have a hard time ahead of him. And if you would like me to write a series that you came up wyth, but don't think you have enough ideas for it(or it is some random thing you made up) I'll be glad to write it.......
Posted: 10/24/2009 10:39am Edited: 2 Staff Edited
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